Peer review 4

Dear Cameron,

I really enjoyed your piece on Virginia Wolf. The time taken for the defining of “enslavement” is well worth it, it is a strong explanation and explores the concept thoroughly. “IV drips of money, greedily drained by Big Business for profit” is my favorite line in your piece, with its disturbing and powerful metaphor as well as the personification of corporations through the capitalisation of the words Big Business it leaves a lasting and haunting impression on the reader.  While I fundamentally disagree with your stance on this question I appreciate your well structured response. I would argue that one needs an imagination to think of any resolution to enslavement, no matter the individual circumstances. While imagination alone will not solve the issue, it is indeed the only birth place of original thought and any creative solution to enslavement. Far from being “too simple” it is sometimes from the simplest places that big things come.

Emily

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